Looks like you are off to a good start! Do you have another picture? Seems out of focus and maybe color is off some? What kind of material did you use for the pen body? Looks like you did some good styling towards the tip.
Yeah I do need to work on my photography a little. I'm in the process of making a small photo booth. That pen is made from spalted dogwood. I have another piece of it I'm gonna turn a grunt call out of.